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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2000-10-06 03:47 PM

Life is getting harder,
and I'm not quite sure why.
All I know is it's not fair,
you shouldn't have died.
How could someone do this?
Especially to someone like you.
We all sit and wonder that,
because there's nothing we can do.
And still we cry these tears,
minute after minute, day after day.
Though they may not change anything,
they could help us some way.
Alex knew you loved him,
his girlfriend's in heaven now.
And although he feels crummy,
he makes it through somehow.
I know sometimes he wishes,
he would have died to.
That would've made it easier,
then to live life without you.
We wish we could've done something,
each one of us blames ourselves.
And the teachers are even crying,
they put the books back on the shelves.
And still we cry these tears,
minute after minute, day after day.
Though they may not change anything,
they could help us some way.
We hope you know we loved you,
and we never will forget.
But you shouldn't have been the reason,
of why we wept and wept.
You should still be with us,
laughing as the day goes by.
But since we can't see you smiling,
we've got a million tears to cry.

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I was thinkin' a lot about my friend Jesica, the one who died, and I decided to share this with you all.
I have a dance tonight at school. Goin' by myself. Ain't got no where to go afterwards, whatever, wasn't invited, don't care. Because I still cry almost every day.
Allysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2000-10-06 04:17 PM

I feel so bad! That was one of the most beautiful poem i've ever read because of how well it was written and how it portrays every single one of your feelings that i could feel them too. I'm so sorry that you lost your friend, i know its a horrible thing to get through. Very beautiful poem!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2000-10-06 05:26 PM

I'm so sorry for your loss. I know a loss of a good friend is always very hard to bear, but you must try to stay strong. I just can't imagine what you're going thru right now, eventhough I've experienced loosing a really good friend too. Thanks for sharing the poem. keep strong!!!

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-06 08:03 PM

This is absolutly amazing writing. I'm not exagerating either, this is awesome. It's so full of meaning and emotion. I have to say this is my favorite poem of yours so far, even though it is based upon such a horrible event.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

4 posted 2000-10-09 08:21 AM

sugarhigh: thanks for replying. I'm glad that you liked it.

acire: thanks for replyin. How's your life?
glad you liked this.

Lakewalker: thanks for replying. This is one of my favorite poems because it reminds me of her. It took one day to get to know her, but it'll take years to forget her. Went to a dance a couple of days ago. Danced with her boyfriend, but I know she won't care, I hope,
well bye all.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2000-10-11 04:12 PM

*bumping this in a pathetic attempt to get ppl to see how I feel*

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

6 posted 2000-10-12 02:29 AM

Allysa~
Dont know how I missed this...Well I do...Havent been here in a couple days...But anyways as I read this I thought about my friend who passed away 2 years ago...And still get upset when I think about him...Girl it will take time but you will never forget...Life does suck...This was a sad but beautiful piece...Please email me if you ever wanna talk...Ok???< !signature-->

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 10-12-2000).]

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

7 posted 2000-10-12 07:52 AM

aww hunnie this is so sad... it is a very well written poem though. your feelings are very vividly expressed, i am sorry you have to go through this, no one should have to... it is so sad to lose a loved one, especially when they are so young

keep up the good writing

~*Pixie*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2000-10-12 05:12 PM

I'm sorry that your friend died, but i'd just like to say that she's in a better place and i hope you get through this without any other horrible thing coming your way. nice poem.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

9 posted 2000-10-23 08:28 AM

Dopey: I would like to say that nothing else that is bad has happened around this, but there is a series of events.
1. Justin and I broke up
2.My friend Brian got runned over by a car and he can't walk,
3. Jesica died.
4. My best friend switched schoools,
5. My other best friend gets so mad at me every day and he might be leaving my school
6. one of my other friends is in some serious trouble.
7. justin is the most confusing persoon on this earth.

branden726

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since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

10 posted 2000-10-24 03:55 PM

HOLY POOP! OOPS AM I ALOUD TO SAY THAT? WELL N E WAYS GOOD POEM IT TOUCHED ME RIGHT THEN AND MADE ME CRY I LOVE IT BUT I DONT BECAUSE ITS SAD I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY EXCEPT YOU WRITE YOUR EMOTIONS PRETTY GOOD

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

11 posted 2000-10-24 04:09 PM

thank you much, I value your opinion. When I check to see if ppl reply, I don't read this poem because it makes me cry too.

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

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