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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-10-06 02:21 PM


This poem is in my opinion pretty lame. One of those little love poems that I NEVER gave to my girlfriend. Eventually I did, but only after she left me hahaha. I gave her ALL my work i've ever done in my life..... that consisted of a binder with more than 175 pages and more than 300 poems. She said it was the best gift anybody ever gave to her. Oh well, too bad she left me eh? haha...it sucks! AHHHHHHHH!!! enjoy the poem!

The Month of May, A Month Indeed:


I met her on a dark, hell day.
Wishing for hope in the month of May.
Conversing with ease about my needle past.
I never thought that she would last.

Two years later she's my refuge and friend.
My fears and pain took a downward bend.
Life turned bright and without hate.
Happiness and love was to be my fate.





I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
Allysa
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1 posted 2000-10-06 03:51 PM


May is a cool month. My birthday is the first of May (Happy un-birthday to me, happy un-birthday to me, I sound like a fruit cake, but I guess that's okay) Anyways, about the five questions I asked you, when and where did you reply because I went back 30 days and couldn't find em. Well, read my poem tears, alright, MAYbe you'll like it. I'm sorry the girl left you. Justin thought that my poems were the best thing he ever got, to bad that I've written about 70 more that he's not gonna get. I love ya man!!!! Forks rule!!!!
Sorry I aint been around much, got a new computer though. Bye. Love ya much, Allysa  

Allysa
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2 posted 2000-10-06 03:54 PM


Okay then. May is awesome. that's when my b-day is.
(happy un-birthday to me, happy un-birthday to me, I sound like a fruit cake but I guess that's okay.) Awesome poem./ I truly like it. Please read my poem caled tears. it's for my friend, Jesica, the one who died. I like it. Love ya, Allysa ;(

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-10-06 07:39 PM


Dopey, I have to say, this is certainly a lighter side of you.  I liked this one even though it's not your normal style.  Keep writing
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