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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
When your tears start to bleed, And when your heart is in desperate need When you can no longer find the strength to be strong And when you feel you're always wrong When the sun is no longer bright And when your goals have strayed from your sight When the face of depression breathes down your back And when it seems the "creator" never cuts you any slack When you can't find it in you to go on And when when you see the face of death in morning's dawn When your dreams fail to come true I'll be there holding your hand, be the morning dew When you need me, I'll always be there And when you can't find your heart, I'll care. When it seems as if you are all alone Remember, I'll always be here, and you're heart will become stone. No matter how very far apart we are My heart and soul won't be as far... ~*~A special dedication to my true friends here and every where else...Jeremy,Erin,Jason,Micale, and Acire -Thank you all for being such great friends in a place I've come to know as my sanctuary  ~*~Everyone hears what you say. Friends listen to what you say. Best friends listen to what you don't say.~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 10-06-2000).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I am touched....as you said, thought we're far apart, i'll always hold you close to my heart Thanks for a wonderful poem. And thanks for all the things you have done for me. You know what I'm talking about. You were always there for me And I'll always be here to return the favor...don't forget that. Remember what I told you. Thanks again for the poem....stay sweet I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Aww that's so sweet!! They should feel so lucky to have a close friend like you It's a really great poem, keep it up  Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Even though I can't call you a close friend (only one here at Passions) I can still tell you how awesome this poem is. To have friends that you care for this much must be such a great feeling. "When you need me, I'll always be there And when you can't find your heart, I'll care." |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
~Acire~ Thanks so much!You're such a friend! I can't thank you enough for what you've done for me. Keep your head up.~Bel~ I apologize that your name isn't on there, I meant to put it on there...but I guess I'm a dork!  I'll fix it, cuz I meant to have you on there. Thxs for replying! ~LakeWalker~ Thank you so much for the kind words! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it! ~*~Everyone hears what you say. Friends listen to what you say. Best friends listen to what you don't say.~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 10-06-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful tribute to the wonderful friendships you cherish Jessica! You've expressed such genuine emotion here ... a lovely piece, straight from the heart! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Love it! I understand the sentiment exactly. Good job, and I hope things are better now. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Beautiful work, as always, Star!! What a beautiful way to express friendship...we should all be so lucky as your friends to have someone in their lives that's as good of a friend as you! :.) Kudos, again. :.) Vreni |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Great poem ya know i love it and everything its just ya know kinda got that something that kept me intrested.....great poem "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Thank you all so much for readnig and replying. I am thankful you have found the time for my work! ~Kit~ Thanks so much for the kind words, I figured this poem was was past due...so I decided to post it. ~Jenn~ Thanks hun! Things are looking up although the situations haven't changed, I decided if no one else cares...why should I? Thanks for the concern! ~Vreni~ Everyone here in passions is my friend, we all share a special bond...one from the heart -- a passion for art--Poetry. There are some who relate more than others in certain areas and more that relate in other areas...hence the benefit of having such a "family" ~Branden~ Thanks for the words of praise...glad you liked! Once again, thank you all for reading and replying, it means a lot to me!! ~*~Everyone hears what you say. Friends listen to what you say. Best friends listen to what you don't say.~*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Why haven't the others like Erin read this yet? hmmmmmmmm... ~*bump*~ I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jessica~ This is a beautiful piece...I feel so special!!!You are a great friend...This brought tears to my eyes...You have been there for me and Im glad I have a friend like you...And a very talented one...Thank you very much for sharing this...It is going in my library...Love ya Jello!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was great! It was so sweet, and it really made me think of everyone who has been there for me when I needed them. Thanx for posting this poem, I liked it alot! Keep writing, I look forward to reading more of your work! < !signature-->Much Love, ~*~Priscilla~*~ ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is very sweet and beautiful. I'm glad you've found friends here to rely on. PIP is a wonderful place, isn't it? Again, exellent work! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey there Jess... I thank you truly for my inclusion in this. You are a great person and I hope knowing that can give you some strength. In return for you're support of me, I'd like offer a lil' oppurtunity. I'll call you tommorow to talk about it. I'll email you tonight also. Luv's ya..later Jeremy Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H. |
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kutzly Junior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 17ohio |
that was a great poem! it really touched me in many ways kutzly "when there was only 2 sets of footprints it was when i carried you my son" |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Ohh honeybun, I'm sorry that it took me so long to read this but I was gone for a week. (emergency trip to Arkansas.) But I'm back now and so happy to have read this because I was feeling realy down and depressed. I can go to sleep easily now knowing that there is someone out there who cares. You know how special you are to me and if you don't then I havn't done my job in telling you so. By the way, did you get my e-mail? I was wondering because usually you write me back. Just checking. Anyway gotta go, I'll talk to you soon. your one true soulmate jason  I'm not concieted...I'm convinced. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Well, Everyone that I wanteds to be sure got to see this has, so I would just like to say thank you all thank you Ron for making such a great place and thank my very good friends for showing me something I often fail to find within myself...Strength,wisdom,ispiration,talent,love,and most of all serenity. Thank you all for contributing to my success not only as a writer, but a person as well. I couldn't be happier than to have met and interacted with such great people!! *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* |
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