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sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
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0 posted 2000-10-05 09:39 PM



Friendship

It doesn’t matter
How much time you take
You can test this friendship
But it won’t break
It can dent
And it can bend
But these things
We can always mend
Because we are strong
We have an impenetrable bond
Of each other
We’ve become quite fond
And when you’re down
And in a rut
I’ll stick by your side
No matter what
Hurt or Betray you
I would never
This friendship of ours
Will go on forever
It’s like a circle
It will never end
That’s how long
I’ll be your friend


~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~



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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-10-05 09:51 PM


This was so sweet...Its good to have friends like that...Keep up the good work!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-10-05 10:00 PM


Very cool poem, babe! I feel like this about some of my really good friends. You're awesome.

*~Meredith~*

I'll just keep on laughing,
Hiding the tears in my eyes...
*Oleander

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Twilight Zone
3 posted 2000-10-06 09:58 AM


You have become one of my favorite poets in passions. What a wonderful poem to write a best friend.  Hope you two stay best of friends forever...keep writing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2000-10-06 04:19 PM


This is such a nice poem, I liked reading it a lot
CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 36
Fitchburg, Ma, Usa
5 posted 2000-10-06 09:18 PM


Great poem! I had a great friend but she went to onther school. Keep Writing
CPAD    


You can't find me for love, nor can you have me for love, you can love me for who I am.

Child of the Stars
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6 posted 2000-10-06 09:53 PM



  Great work. Friendship is such a treasure.....

   ~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
7 posted 2000-10-06 11:26 PM


this is what its all about, friends. they are there for ya and your there for them. nice way of expressing it! great poem.

jeremy r

"I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering,
I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection."
~DMX~ "Prayer III"

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
8 posted 2000-10-07 06:06 PM


Thanx y'all for all your replies!!

Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~


~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~



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