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~*Meghan*~
Junior Member

since 2000-05-22

Posts 17

0 posted 2000-10-05 09:13 PM

I've been waiting for you,
looking out my window
up unto the night sky.
I've been wishing on a star,
that I might find you.
Then one day you came to me,
form somewhere far away.
I knew you'd find me,
just a matter of time.
The first time I saw you,
I just started to cry.
I looked into your eyes,
and when you spoke,
you did not lie.

I believe that we'll be toghther forever,
if only you'll be there.
I'll give you my heart,
and you give my yours.
And we will never part.
Although young and nieve,
I feel your laughter in the breeze.
I feel your smile in the mid-day sun.
I hear your voice whe I run.
I can feel your presence in the air,
and this is how i know,
you'll always care!

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-10-05 10:00 PM

Meghan~
This is so sweet...Someone must be really special to you...This is somewhat how I feel about my boyfriend...Thanks for sharing it...And keep up the good work!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-10-05 10:04 PM

I want to compliment you on the enormity of emotion you expressed in your poem. It was just beautiful. *applause*

*~Meredith~*

I'll just keep on laughing,
Hiding the tears in my eyes...
*Oleander

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2000-10-06 10:09 AM

This is one of those poems that when read, you could just sense the emotions the poet pour into this poem. Very beautifully written Meghan...keep it up

Im glad to finally see poems of satisfaction and not hurting

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-10-06 07:10 PM

This is so nice, I like how it's written. Well done

"I can feel your presence in the air,
and this is how i know,
you'll always care!"

CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
Junior Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 36
Fitchburg, Ma, Usa

5 posted 2000-10-06 09:21 PM

Good poem Meghan! It's sweet bye CPAD

You can't find me for love, nor can you have me for love, you can love me for who I am.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-10-07 01:08 PM

hey well the poem was nice. I copliment you on it. Great job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

7 posted 2000-10-07 03:05 PM

Hey! this was a good poem! I understood where you were coming from, keep it up!

Curlz

"i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky"
enrique iglesias

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