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0 posted 2000-10-04 08:45 PM


When i fall you reach out your hand.
Sometimes i feel as though your my only friend.
I push you away,
Scared of being so close.
But you stay by my side,
Not the least bit provoked.
When im with you i break down and cry,
Im sorry,
But i cant seem to explain why.
Your eyes are worried,
Your heart is scared.
My feelings from you i wish i could have bared.
I dont want you to worry,
You treat me to well.
Im not ok right now...
I'm sorry i fell.
Dont look at me with your hurt eyes,
I dont want to see you cry.
If tomorrow meant living without you,
I assure you i would never die.
Just dont try to fix me,
Right now leave me be.
I dont know why you stick around,
To be treated this way by me.
But you do and it shows how much you care,
it scares me,
But i know now that you will always be there.

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1 posted 2000-10-04 09:26 PM


This is really good...To me the best feeling is knowing that someone cares about me...Be happy that you have this person there for you...The people I thought would always be there for me havent been...So I guess I thought wrong...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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2 posted 2000-10-05 02:14 PM


I'm happy you have people who care for you. Good poem and keep it up!



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3 posted 2000-10-05 03:53 PM


This is great, I really like these lines:

If tomorrow meant living without you,
I assure you i would never die.


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