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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-10-04 08:33 PM


Denying the Impossible Truth:


You're shading me
From your eternity.
I walk without a smile
For a very long while,
And I wonder why
The deep, eye piercing sky
Is so blue.
And why the mountains so high.
But you, you can't deny
The love that you feel for me.
The love that pays no fee.
The truth that cannot be.





I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-10-05 02:45 PM


Dopey- I like this one because it seems simply yet deep.  Does that make sense?  Well, anyway, I like how this was written.
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