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I'll always be here |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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I'll be here when you need me, I'll be here when that someone you love leaves, I'll be the one to have tears with you, I am that person who will comfort you and tell you he was trash. You mean so much to me, I want you to know that no matter how hard it hurts, I'll always be there to comfort your broken heart, You've gotten my trust and I feel like ive gotten yours, Together me and you will tell stories that are real, The stories of the men and women who have hurt us bad. When we begin to compare, I find your the one who in the end will care, I find this fasination with you, Some of the things ive had done doesnt compare to what ppl have done to you, I feel so bad but I tell you that I care, I also let the words slip, The words I said to you froze you in your chair, I spoke it again and I said "I Love You", You looked at me and said the same, Ever since then we have been together, Forever and ever till this heart dies deep inside of me. This isnt my best work but I was having trouble write how I felt today I think its a writers block or sumthin "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
well for not being able to write out how you feel this is great! good work again  ~*Justine*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was good. I think you have expressed your feelings well. Keep writing! Luv, SweetStuff ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job...you express well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Ok, if you write like this when you are in a block, then I should really see one when you're writting good. Great poem, I really enjoy reading this kind of poems, it was very good. Bye. It's been raining since you left me. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good work branden!!!Wish I had this type of writers block everyday... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey this was kinda a block to me i usually go for ryhming poems i know not all have to be but its easier thanks guys "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was expressed very well branden, I like it |
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