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0 posted 2000-10-04 03:07 PM


No one understands me,
No one feels my pain.
Thats ok,
Cause this is all a game.
It's the game of life,
And this is how i play.
I struggle and fighyt,
To get through every day.
Dont show you your really feeling,
People get concerned.
Dont let people know too much,
You might get burned.
You can act like your ok...
So the annoyance will go away.
But in this game,
Unless you choose to no longer play,
The pain is here to stay.



© Copyright 2000 Michele - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-10-04 03:41 PM


These are interesting thoughts you're having, the poem made me think.  You wrote it very well.

"But in this game,
Unless you choose to no longer play,
The pain is here to stay."


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2 posted 2000-10-04 05:03 PM


Hey   I liked this, it made me think,too. your words are very true also. keep up the great work

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3 posted 2000-10-04 06:00 PM


Great poem   good thoughts too   it was very well written, keep up the good work i am looking forward to seeing more
~*Justine*~

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4 posted 2000-10-04 08:19 PM


Hey so this was real good. The game of life is a hard one. One in which your the individual piece on a game of chess and both the white and black are surrounding you ready and willing to pounce upon any given movement. Very fragile.......



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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5 posted 2000-10-04 09:16 PM


The game of life is one of the hardest things...We go through all sorts of stuff...But those are the things that make out life complete...Thanks for sharing this one...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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