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jytree
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0 posted 2000-10-04 10:07 AM


Ruthless

Here we are born from a egimia,
Set apart by the way we think,
By the way we feel,
All the things that make us-us!

Yet there is a breed that lacks that part of us,
It is the part in which makes us different from anyone else,
Our heart,

We are born proud yet when we go are own way there is a price to pay,
So lose hearts and become,
Ruthless people,


Ruthless people set apart,
Just because they have no heart,
Ruthless people set apart,

Ruthless people come from are,
Or are we them,
Remeber when you are set apart,
It is not because you have no heart,
it is what that is in it.(the baby is back!!!!!.)



early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
but socially dead.

© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
chic
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1 posted 2000-10-04 01:01 PM


Great poem J.  

"Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-10-04 03:26 PM


I agree with chic, this poem was very well written and nice.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-10-04 05:04 PM


Interesting thoughts, I liked this one.  Thanks for sharing it!  
chic
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4 posted 2000-10-06 12:40 PM


Dopey Dope-Of course you agree with me...why wouldn't you LOL J/K

"Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!

jytree
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5 posted 2000-10-06 02:44 PM


thanks for the reply dopey scg chic and by the way don't tease dopey

early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
but socially dead.

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