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To Mommy...
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To Mommy... |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
To Mommy... I tried very hard Mommy. Really I did! Won't you ever forgive me? I was just a kid. But now I'm grown and understand, that indeed, I was wrong. But your anger Mommy, Can't last that long. Don't you see that I love you so very, very much? In your blindness, Can't you feel? All I really want to show is my kindness, And my love for you. Mommy, don't you hear me cry at night? Don't you know I'm hurt? I never meant to start this fight. But we can start over Mommy, If only you'll agree. That maybe we have a chance. Who knows, we'll see. Do you miss me Mommy? Like the way, I miss you. Do you miss all the fun things, We used to do? I want you to know. Even in this pain, I'll never let go Mommy... |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Umm is it just me, or wasn't this poem just posted by someone else?? "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
First of all Welcome to passions!!!I hope that you enjoy it here...Good first post...I dont know why but I feel as if I somewhat could relate to this...My mom left us about 4 years ago...And ever since then I held a grudge against her...Thanks for sharing this...I do hope to see more work by you!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hello everyone: Thanks for replying. I really love getting feed-back for my poems! And I'm sorry for surprising everyone but you've probably seen this poem up somewhere before because I once was Night_mist on here long ago and then quit and now I'm back as Angel! Sorry for the inconviences and surprises! Lotsa Love, Angel_(^_~) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked the feeling of need in this one, it played on my emotions well. Wonderful job writing this one!!! |
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