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Dirty Deeds of Humankind (humorous)
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: This may seem a bit....ummm how would I put it....uhhhh..... Totally out of place! haha, but i think it's quite funny and so do my friends. This is a poem about......well......yea you know. So enjoy!! Dirty Deeds of Humankind: Dripple of pee. A spot of poo. Consumes all of me, But nothing of you. I push real hard. This is so fun. And now my friend The deed is done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow yeah that's umm a bit uhhhhh funny. The more times you read it the more humorous it is. I gotta tell you, you're really uh creative there amigo. lol. hasta luego Bel |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Hey, how did you do that? This poem was great, it's very funny, I think it's the first time I read a funny poem, I always read sad and nostalgic poems, some happy one too, but I've never read something like this. It was great, bye. It's been raining since you left me. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~This was quite humorous...Thanks for making me laugh for the first time in like a couple days...  ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
lol you could give Chris Rock a run for his moeny...loved the poem dope HUT TWO THREE FOUR! HUT TWO THREE FOUR! the clowns on parade the clowns mascerade rip off your face rip off your brain the clowns on parade -me |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA ! DAMN GOOD OL' CHAP. IT'S NO SECRET WHERE YOUR INSPIRATION CAME FROM THOUGH. HA HA HA HA HA HA HA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Somwhere between the "dripple of pee" and "the deed is done" I found it in me to actually smile for the first time in days. There was actually a break in the tears, and I thank you for that. The sad poems around here were only beginning to depress me more...but yiou my friend have amised me for the next few days. THANK YOU Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well hey, this is great! I would have never expected such positive replies to the poem. I thought i was going to get yelled at for being out of place and whatnot. I'm glad I made you all smile and this is just to show that there's not always a serious side to me. In fact, people around here find it hard to believe I am a poet because all I ever do is clown around. So yea, I'm glad you all liked. THANKS! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Eeeewwwwwwwwwww!!!!! This is good |
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