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Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

0 posted 2000-10-03 04:57 PM

I know too little,
You ask too much.
Thrown deep within your riddle,
Walking on a broken leg with no crutch.

I see you there, and I'm strained to smile.
Feeling lost, confused and misplaced.
If only I understood, it may make sense for a while.
But I'm nothing but an angel, falling from grace.

You speak such sweet words,
yet I'm too tired to hear.
My days are awash; wishing my sins to be purged.
Finding myself missing a link; this I know, has never been near.

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 10-03-2000).]

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

1 posted 2000-10-03 08:38 PM

I don't see why nobody has replied to this yet! It's very good! Bravo! *yay* I was the first one!

*hehe* keep it up!

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-10-03 10:41 PM

Jenn~I wish I had your brain for just one day...I love the way you write...You are very talented and we are lucky to have you here...Keep it up girl!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-04 03:16 PM

You're so good at writing, I love this one.

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2000-10-04 03:40 PM

You know what, thank you. Thank you all, I love hearing your feedback it means a lot to me. I appreciate you putting time in to reply to me.
Jenn

"He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright

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