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Narcotica |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Narcotica You hear it in your ears, But your heart still can’t believe she said it, Yeah she’s my favorite painkiller, Courses through me like an anaesthetic, She’s takes me to a high like this, I hate to miss her, even for a second, After all this time, I still feel the same, Flying as high as a jet plane, Tell me, This high’s never gonna crash, I don’t wanna come off this cloud, Then have to drag me away, Kicking and screaming out loud, You tell me, I’m just a wanna-be, Please tell me, what you want to see, As soon as this, narcotic influence, Has subsided, I think it’s time I confided, In someone I can trust, oh god I don’t think, I can take much more of this… Narcotic bliss…filters through me like this, And all I knew now, is I can’t get enough of this, I won’t survive long if, this goes on…much longer So tell me, This high’s never gonna crash, I don’t wanna come off this cloud, Then have to drag me away, Kicking and screaming out, so loud, Displace this shroud from off my face, She makes me so sad, I’m crying out loud, yeah, And for crying out loud, I never thought, It could get this bad…yeah, So tell me, What it’s me and what’s in you, Every little drug you do, Goes straight through, to my heart, You’re a twenty sack, And It’s giving me a panic attack, Well, so much for growing up… ---------- Yeah, it's a song... Spreading insanity, one post at a time "Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I was like.....this is a def. song! But its pretty damn cool. I'd like to know what style of music it'd be played too, it only fits to know if i know its a song. Anyway, i liked it a lot, good good! You write better songs than i could ever do....well...at least for now. Soon enuff though ill perfect it. But you do good....i liked it tons!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
ROCK MY WORLD DERANGER!!! this poem is sooo good!! i love it!!! hope to see more very soon!! ~*Pixie*~ |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
heh i love the title of this and the poem!!!..this is great Deranger and definately a song...i should start writing more songworthy things..that'd be cool...well again an amazing poem and i'll be waiting for another! HUT TWO THREE FOUR! HUT TWO THREE FOUR! the clowns on parade the clowns mascerade rip off your face rip off your brain the clowns on parade -me |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Deranger, this one really hits really close to home. I like it alot, definitely do keep it up. jason I'm not concieted...I'm convinced. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is very creative, you did a great job writing this song. I like it a lot  "Tell me, This high’s never gonna crash, I don’t wanna come off this cloud, Then have to drag me away, Kicking and screaming out loud" |
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