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Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
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0 posted 2000-10-02 09:41 AM


Just need to say something
Just need to get it out

I'll be gone for a while
Need to clear my mind

Have to go somewhere
Just to make me better

Cuz my thoughts were wrong
My feelings were no good

All the things from my past need to go away
And alone I won't get far

So I'll have to go away
Away to other people

And try to make it better now
I'll try to be someone again

But I'll never forget the ppl who cared
(at least I thought they did)

But I'll get better and come back again
So this is a goodbye, but not forever

Just for a while
When I am better again

Ok, like this "poem" says, I'll be gone for a while...

luvz to all, VS


All of my life
Where have you been
I wonder if I'll
Ever see you again

~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~


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anomaly187
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 284
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1 posted 2000-10-02 10:02 AM


Hey Virgin well i have really enjoyed reading all of your unique poems and it will be a loss for the Passions community to see you go away..but i say farewell till you come back again...and i hope you can get better< !signature-->

HUT TWO THREE FOUR!
HUT TWO THREE FOUR!
the clowns on parade
the clowns mascerade
rip off your face
rip off your brain
the clowns on parade
-me


[This message has been edited by anomaly187 (edited 10-02-2000).]

Erin
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2 posted 2000-10-02 12:36 PM


VS~
Girl where ya going???Well I hope you come back soon!!!This was a good way to tell us that you would be gone for awhile...Thanks for sharing with us...Hope to see you back soon!!!


It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-10-02 02:31 PM


VS- you will be greatly missed around here, we'll be waiting for your return! (Good poem by the way  )

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-02-2000).]

Child of the Stars
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4 posted 2000-10-02 03:17 PM



  Great job on telling this.  Good luck with whatever comes your way...

   ~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

LoveBug
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5 posted 2000-10-02 03:21 PM


We all have times when we have to leave things that we love in order to get our priorities straight. We all understand, but you will be missed! I wish you the best of luck!  

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.



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6 posted 2000-10-02 03:32 PM


I'm probably speaking for a lot of members when I say that we'll miss you.  But if this is the only way for you to get things straight, let me be the first to wish you all the luck.  Can't wait to have you back

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
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7 posted 2000-10-02 04:16 PM


ey, thanks guys!! your just SOOOOO sweet to me....

luvz ya all!!!!!
Renée


All of my life
Where have you been
I wonder if I'll
Ever see you again

~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~


Jenn Cirrincione
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8 posted 2000-10-02 05:03 PM


good poem... I'm sorry things are not so good right now. See you when all is better!
Don't forget us all!
Jenn

"He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright

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