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wanting a new begging |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
In our past we didnt do very well as a family, but none of that **** is my fault! You treat me as if it was. you dont even try to make it better, you get anrgy at me for never comming over, or never calling, But the telephone works bith ways!! i am looosing everyone who means something to me!! and im blamming it all on myself. but its not my fault! i havent done anything its them... and partially you! if it wasnt for you id know how to treat people, but i treat chris the same way you treated mom, and thats not very nice! i hate it ,i have the hardest time gettign cloe or trusting anyone because i gave you all my trust and love and all you did was take me for granted and walked away after breaking my heart into pieces!! why coudnt you just be there and treat me the right way , instead of not being there and treating me the worng ways!?! you exspect me just to ct like nothing ever happened! well guess what i can NEVER forgive you , the way you were when i was a child will effect me every day it is always with me,.. its not somethign i can jsut cahange!! so get up off m backa nd start acting like a father and ill start acting like im your daughter!! but for rigth now,.. i wnat nothing to do with you until you get your act together! p.s. to all the readers ... yes this is for my father , no me and him dont get along very well i do have alot of anger towards him.....and i know i have one good friend that will always be ther eand has had the same exact problems as i and that is meagan. jess i know your there too!! and for my best friend that has left me i only wish somehow some way she would understand that she hurt me more than anything!! but i hope you all liked it and i guess ill readr and reply to your responses later!(sorry about all the miss haps in this letter/poem!) Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care! |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Interesting Janette. Lots of hostility; which I understand. I hope your dad is able to pull his head out of his anal cavity (LoL sorry I had to) and be you father. If not, well then I guess Meagan will always be there for you and understand huh? Best of luck... ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this was great, i bet it really helped drain the anger out a little. i want to read more from you again! love, jeremy r "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the pure emotion you put into this one, it's a great use of feeling. Love the poem  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I understand where you are coming from...But it was my mom that hasnt been a mother to me...My dad has been there for me in ways that I couldnt even explain...I think that getting it out helps though...You did a good job expressing yourself...Thanks for sharing this... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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