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The spoon (has nothing to do w/ dopey's poem)
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The spoon (has nothing to do w/ dopey's poem) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Do we grate one your nerves?? Do we make you feel pain? When you think it's all over, does it get worse? Can we rip out your heart and take pleasure? Are we confusing and strange? Crabby at the mention of another girl's name? We're unintelligent and useless, aren't we all the same? You call us all sorts of names, Weren't we "sweetie" last night...? The name you call us now will start a fight. Refer to us as all sorts of things... We're wenches, and witches, we're even...(you know.) Yet you stay... now don't you? This spoon may rip out your heart... But you have yet to learn... "maybe I should use a fork?" * Written for an ex-b-friend of mine, who whines and complains about the women he's with, but yet he always goes back! The spoon reference refers to what a woman supposedly is. ( to Dopey: this is not meant to be deep, or meaningful... it's a joke for my ex... so don't thrash it too bad...!) [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-30-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
You call us all sorts of names, Weren't we "sweetie" last night...? I like that part...This one was good...But can I ask what made you call it "The Spoon"???I got the whole poem except for the last part of it...The whole spoon deal made me lose track of what I was going to say... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
My ex had this thing about calling women 'spoons' cause we ruthlessly rip out their hearts with spoons (they hurt more because they are blunt). So I just kinda worked it into the poem.  Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well, you know what? I like it Nice job on this one  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i liked it. You're right, i did have nothing to do with my poem. I liked seeing my name in the title in parenthesis though! HURA!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey loved this poem...ssssssppppppoooooooonnnnnnnnn's hurt..in Titus a man gets a rather large spoon shoved down his throat...once again great poem...the color you post in hurts my eyes I am buried up to my neck in Contradictionary flies I take pride as the kind of illiterature I'm very ape and very nice -Kurt Cobain |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you all for your replies! I will try to post in darker, more muted colors.. just for you ok? Thanks for the compliments. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
An interesting perspective, but I liked! I thought it was very neat. As for the who spoon hurting, I think a knife in the back hurts more...anyways, great write. Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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