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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-30 01:00 PM

Never Ending Growth:

My loved one has left,
But within me she stayed.
I could not shed a tear
For I did not fear a stray.

Strong with future hope
With all that we've worked for.
We will make it through
With love, and much more.

Later on in life
We'll look on knowing
That this was meant to be.
That love is still growing.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

1 posted 2000-09-30 01:17 PM

This was a really sweet poem. I'm sorry that your close one has died and i'm not good at saying things about death because i have not experienced death of a friend or family member, well not when i was old enough to understand. It's good to hear that you are coping so well

"i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky"
enrique iglesias

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-09-30 01:35 PM

I'm not trying to cause trouble here, so don't take this like I am. I don't think this is about death as curly said, is it? I guess I percieved it to be a person that you loved went away or you broke up. The reason I say that is because later you use "we" and I would think that means you will be back with the person. Or maybe I just got this poem all wrong

Anyway, I like it Dopey!

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

3 posted 2000-09-30 02:14 PM

Wow i like this one a lot and i can actually understand it lol good going u expressed words very good in here.

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-09-30 02:18 PM

Lakewalker you are right. Good job in interpreting and correcting curly. Yea this was my girlfriend leaving for a trip to the states for 2 months......it was this summer. It was a poem saying like......even though you are leaving, i know we'll be just fine and make it through when you get back. I, myself went to the states. She was in Louisiana, and i was in PA attending Penn State University. This poem is very imp. to me because it proves a lot of things to me and her. She dumped me during this time a part and her reason was out of nothingness. I read her the poem that I wrote when she left and totally threw her off guard. I told her how happy i was with the relationship and how it was totally inconceivable on how she could just leave me like that. Anyway NO COMMENTS ON THIS EXPLANATION PLEASE. This is something that i am very very VERY sensetive about. If somebody says anything to tick me off, i'd undoubtedly show it. So just comply with my request to avoid hostility on MY part. This is just about the ONLY THING IN THE WORLD that could bring about hostility from me.

Thanks!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

5 posted 2000-09-30 02:20 PM

hey! nice work here Dopey!!!
hmz...I also think this is not about death, but about a love who went away...
anyway, great poem and keep up the good work Dopey!!

luvz, VS

All of my life
Where have you been
I wonder if I'll
Ever see you again

~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

6 posted 2000-09-30 05:28 PM

I LUV you! *L* This was a REALLY sweet, cute poem! Rock on, baby!

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