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branden726
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0 posted 2000-09-30 12:32 PM


My iguana was so green,
He was like a best friend to me,
He never ever bite me or whiped me with his tail,
But it was just lastnight when he took a dive,
I fed him green lettece but i didnt cut it up small enough,
So he ended up to choke choke choke,
I tryed to revive the lil guy,
But there in my hand he did die,
I almost cryed that lastnight it was friday september 29th,
It was so hard for me to bury him,
I almost had a lil funeral for him,
He just meant so much to me!




"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

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StarPryncess17
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1 posted 2000-09-30 12:36 PM


What a wonderful tribute to your recently passed friend. I'm sorry that you lost your friend, I know it can be hard, Keep up the good work! Once again, I'm so sorry.
Love Always
~*~Star~*~


~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

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2 posted 2000-09-30 12:57 PM


Sorry that happened to you guy. Those kind of things really do suck big time. I hope your life is filled with joy and you find another friend, not to replace HIM, but to replace that single void within your soul.
Good poem.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


curlygurly
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3 posted 2000-09-30 01:27 PM


I'm sorry that he died. what a nice way to recognize him  
Curlz


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Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-09-30 01:37 PM


As the others said, wonderful tribute and sorry about losing a friend.
Erin
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5 posted 2000-09-30 01:38 PM


That was so sad...I am sorry at the loss of your pet...I know that when my dog died it really affected me...And for some reason they say that when a pet dies it affects you more...I dont know why...Maybe because its like a companion...But anyways good way to show your feelings and a beautiful tribute to your pet!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

branden726
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6 posted 2000-09-30 02:01 PM


Hey thank you all for helping me cope with my recently lost friend it was really hard for me because i lost him lastnight and it was hard well thanks for all yout concerns
                     LOVE ALWAYS
                        Branden

Suga_Baby
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7 posted 2000-09-30 05:35 PM


Aww this is so sweet. What a wonderful way to say goodbye to your friend. I would cry FOREVER if I lost my kittie cat! >^..^<
Just remember that your friend will always be with you, in your mind, in your heart, and in spirit. Keep yer chin up!

cutie2005
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8 posted 2000-09-30 06:23 PM


that is soo sweet. It always good to have a good friend, but never good when they die... I hope you feel better and get a new friend...
Luv ya,
  cutie

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9 posted 2000-09-30 06:52 PM


It always hurts to lose a pet. Animals are the best friends you can ever have. They understand when no one else can. They are there when all your human friends betray you. They never gossip about you, and they are the best listeners. Losing a pet is just as painful as losing a human friend. I hope that writing this helped your pain. I extend my sympathy to you.

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.



anomaly187
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10 posted 2000-09-30 09:13 PM


one of my dogs died..two cats and many mice that died as the result of my cats living...this was a really nice poem...when i was in Israel i saw a chameleon on the road bright bright bright green...

I am buried up to my neck in
Contradictionary flies
I take pride as the kind of illiterature
I'm very ape and very nice
-Kurt Cobain

anomaly187
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11 posted 2000-09-30 09:13 PM


one of my dogs died..two cats and many mice that died as the result of my cats living...this was a really nice poem...when i was in Israel i saw a chameleon on the road bright bright bright green...

I am buried up to my neck in
Contradictionary flies
I take pride as the kind of illiterature
I'm very ape and very nice
-Kurt Cobain

Wicced_Witch
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12 posted 2000-10-01 01:52 AM


I am sorry to hear about you losing your pet.  Beautiful tribute to him though.  I think sometimes we take losing a pet harder because it is just easier to get close to them.  You don't really have to worry about them betraying you, as you do with people.  I know I cried more when two of my dogs died than I did when my great-grandma died.  Seems kinda bad, but thats just how it is.  Again, sorry about your loss.  Hope you feel better soon

-Stephanie

branden726
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13 posted 2000-10-01 11:38 AM


i cant believe how much this has been reply'd to and i thank all of you very much this was a very hard lost and it was hard to deal with it but hey i have gotten a new iguana but this one will never live up to the standards the old one did thanks guys.
Isabel Galaxia
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14 posted 2000-10-01 04:27 PM


Hey, this is so sad.  I'm sorry you lost him!!   I know how that goes though, I've had lots of cats, one that was 19 years old before she had a stroke.  Well, great poem, keep it up
Bel

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