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Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

0 posted 2000-09-29 02:24 PM

-Look Through My Eyes-

I have done this to others,
now it is happening to me.
Now I know just how they felt,
it was just too hard to see.

To look through someone else's eyes,
is an interesting view.
Maybe you should try it now--
That is all I ask of you.

My sorrow and guilt are overwhelming,
I have never felt this way.
I could have began to love you,
but now you may not stay.

Please tell me how you feel,
as you look through my eyes.
I trust what you will see,
is a sight you will dispise.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-09-29 02:50 PM

Another great one Pixie

Isn't it interesting sometimes to learn other people's points of view? I like the poem

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"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 09-29-2000).]

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2000-09-29 02:56 PM

Lakewalker- thank you SO MUCH for all your wonderful replies! they are very encouraging and it is important to me to know other poeples points of view on my work even if they dont; like it

again THANK YOU!!!!
~*Pixie*~

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

3 posted 2000-09-29 03:09 PM

Hey there. This was kickin! I liked it.

~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-09-29 04:24 PM

*speaks in an chinese accent* ancient chinese legend says "this is good".

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-09-29 04:58 PM

Pixie~~~I liked this one...To look at someone elses life through their eyes would be very intresting...Might be fun but then again it might not...Thanks for sharing this with us!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2000-09-29 05:00 PM

This is good. Accepting ones mistakes is not the easiest thing to do. Actually, for some poeple, it's realy very hard. It shows what kind of person you are though, being able to accept your mistakes. keep it up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

7 posted 2000-09-29 11:34 PM

may i reply to this poem in the most intellegent and tackful way i know how.....THIS POEMS KICKS BUTT!

There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

"Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live."

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

8 posted 2000-09-29 11:42 PM

What a wonderful poem on the lessons of "putting yourself in 'my' shoes" I thought that was very well put! Your thoughts were worded well and your point came across well. Siskel and Jess Girl give you two thumbs up!

Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

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