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Pixie-Babe03
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0 posted 2000-09-28 05:34 PM




-The Tears-
"Shut all guys out," I said
"Its easier this way"
"If you let them in," I said
"Dearly you will pay"

Love is not worth the hurt
emotions can be ignored.
Take your heart and hide it,
lock it away and keep it secured.

Once again, I did not listen.
Nope, not today!
Now I am paying dearly,
and the tears, they flow away.

© Copyright 2000 Justine - All Rights Reserved
curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
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1 posted 2000-09-28 06:47 PM


i really liked this poem. you sure can write girl! i guess if you have something to write about it flows easy. keep up the good writin!
Curlz


"i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky"
enrique iglesias


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-28 07:04 PM


I love the way you started this one...It was good!!!Keep up the good work!!!I enjoyed reading this one...

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

Alwye
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In the space between moments
3 posted 2000-09-28 10:19 PM


Ah, relationships can hurt so much, can't they?  Good job expressing your emotions here!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

DancinQueen
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4 posted 2000-09-28 10:44 PM


Hey! This was great, it flowed lovely..just like your tears   Keep up the great work and stay strong

~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people
5 posted 2000-09-29 03:51 PM


Oh, this is great!  I sensed an attitude behind this one, I liked it   Great job.
Dopey Dope
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6 posted 2000-09-29 03:55 PM


I liked this one a lot Pixie. good job




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


anomaly187
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 284
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7 posted 2000-09-29 07:52 PM


this should teach a lesson to others who don't listen...loved the poem Pix..

I am buried up to my neck in
Contradictionary flies
I take pride as the kind of illiterature
I'm very ape and very nice
-Kurt Cobain

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
8 posted 2000-09-29 11:56 PM


what am I to tell you? I know you've heard the 'ole it gets better with time, and I do believe that the pain subsides with time...but what are you to do unitl then?? My advice to you: Pick your heart up ff the floor and be kind to yourself and your emotions. Keep your head up girl! Best of luck!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

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