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As i sit alone in the dark (plz reply)
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As i sit alone in the dark (plz reply) |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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As I sit here in the dark, So lonely so scared, You come throught that closed door, My eyes are blinded from the light, I cant see you who are you? I cannot believe it, It cant be you, I thought you left me, I thought it was all wrong, You told me this and stepped on me like a rug, Now your back should i be happy or sad? Im so confused all of this is bad, But you came through that door when all of it was wrong, You shed this new light on my darkend soul, I cant believe when you heard i was in bad shape, You came back and held me so tight. I sit here at nights crying, Happy tears are all that come out, U picked me up off that ground and when i was about to fall.....you caught me in mid air, This is true friendship but its hard to take it from you, I remember when me and you were two, Yes it hurts but it also helps, For if you werent here my soul would be dark! Thanks Everyone This is for all the poets out there that reply'd to my poems when u guys did that it made me feel like i was something special "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Branden~~~What can I say???You came to the right place to find happiness...This place is the best!!!By the way your poem is good too!!!  It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
This poem is about love but mostly about how all u guys here kinda helped me by replyin to my poems thats what i meant by the end of the poem i just dont want n e one to get confused later Branden "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
well as usual this rocks so bad!! i love it  keep it up bud!! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
It's great to find a place to belong, isn't it? Exellent work! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a lovely tribute to those here within Passions walls Branden ... very nice expression in this piece! Best wishes, /Kit |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Thank you! I just thought it would be nice to make you guys know that your helping someone with his sense of direction and also giving him the courage to post his poems not only on a website but also all accross the city, You see it wasnt till i posted my first poem here that i had the courage to let n e one see my poems and this weekend im entering a contest for the best poem done by a teenager i hope i win! "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*polishes his nails* yes, well we here at Passions DO bring out the good in everybody who enters our realm. Great post.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good luck this weekend! Tell us what happens Nice poem, and we appreciate your replies and support too  |
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