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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-09-28 01:55 PM


OK so yes, the trend.....if you don't know what i mean by that then look at my other poem posted up yesterday. ANYWAYZZZZZZZZ!!!! Here's this poem:

Romance:


You're a pretty little girl,
But you don't know the couple dance.
I'm really into you,
And I want to start a romance.

Would you like to know my name?
Maybe my favorite color too?
I'd like to be your lovely man.
That's something I'd like to do.

The rain falls down the mountain.
The sun refused to shine.
I look into your heart,
And I want to call it mine.

So please pretty girl
Give us a chance.
I think we'll make it through,
And start a romance.






I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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1 posted 2000-09-28 02:59 PM


Awwww Dopey's in love!!!LOL Good poem buddy!!!What poem are you talking about though that you posted yesterday???

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-09-28 03:03 PM


The poem i am talking about it titled "The Limit of the Unlimited".




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Isabel Galaxia
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3 posted 2000-09-28 05:17 PM


Aww Dopey that's sweet!  You've got a lot of talent...keep it up muchacho okay?
Hasta luego
Bel


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-09-29 06:08 AM


Oh Javier ... this was lovely! Such tender and beautiful sentiments, with wonderful affection and hope shining through of a new romance on the horizon. Much enjoyed this I did!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-09-29 03:58 PM


I really dont want to say this to one of your poems, but it's cute   I like it!
Dopey Dope
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6 posted 2000-09-29 04:00 PM


Hahahahahahahaha it's cute? I found that to be sooooooooooo funny. As if cute was bad in a sense lakewalker. Well yea, i guess the poem is cute. Hahahahahahahaha awwwwwww




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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