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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
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Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-09-28 01:11 AM


Memories of you and me
bring me to tears

I miss the days
when we would share everything together

I miss the best friend I use to have
who was a sister to me

Why do you have to forget me now
what have I done to deserve this?

Have I made you mad?
tell me what I have done
so I can understand why you don't talk to me anymore

you never call
and when I see you
you don't say a word to me

do your new friends mean more to you then me?
haven't I been a good friend to you?

I've already lost two best friends
and I don't want to loose you

don't forget me now
there is still so much time
and so many things to talk about

I've been a true friend from the beginning
always there when you needed to talk
always there when you were crying
and always there when you were happy

I thought I was your best friend
I thought I was your sister
but I guess I was wrong

I may never want another best friend again
because I'm tired
tired of crying
tired and hurting
tired of wishing

Maybe this is a sign
that best friends
arn't real
and that they don't exist

I wish it wern't so
but I have to let go
and forget you somehow
because the pain is too much

goodbye my sister
it was fun for a while
but now it's over
and the day is done


© Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved
anomaly187
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US
1 posted 2000-09-28 01:29 AM


hmm this was really sad...i think in everyone's life they end up losing friends they thought were true to them...this was a beautiful poem for expressing yourself.

I am buried up to my neck in
Contradictionary flies
I take pride as the kind of illiterature
I'm very ape and very nice
-Kurt Cobain

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-09-28 02:49 PM


I completely agree with anomaly, as i usually tend too. Great job!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-28 02:54 PM


Poe~~~WOW This is good!!!I know how you feel too...Me & my best friend havent been talking lately...Who knows why...And if we do talk its like strange...Like we dont know what to say to each other...But hang in their your friend might come back around...Keep up the good work!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
4 posted 2000-09-28 04:39 PM


Thanks guys, it is hard going through stuff like this, but I'm just gonna lay low with her and wait till she realizes whats she's doing and I know she will come around. Thanks for your repies. smiles ¤poe¤

Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
5 posted 2000-09-28 06:07 PM


thjis is so sad  * but a great poem just the same   i love it! keep up the great work! I love your poems
~*Pixie*~

Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
6 posted 2000-09-29 11:48 AM


great poem!!! I REALLY know what you're talking about...not good....not good at all... I have lost a lot of "best friends" too in the past and when I thought I had found my one-and-only-true-best-friend-til-the-end (hehe....) he left me... but the funny part is that after three months, he came back to me... *weird* but I liked it... cuz I missed him like hell...so... and actually I don't want to know yet why he left me... maybe after a while he'll tell...

SO, I hope for you that your best friend will think about it and will realize that SHE has lost a great friend! Good luck!

luvz, VS

All of my life
Where have you been
I wonder if I'll
Ever see you again

~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~

Acies
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Twilight Zone
7 posted 2000-09-29 12:58 PM


very sad!!!  First of all, a true friend, specially a supposed to be best friend doesn't let the other one hurt that way.  I don't think that she really is, even a firend at all.  Keep writing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
8 posted 2000-10-01 07:13 PM


Thank you guys for your replies, I appreciate you taking the time to comment on them. I'm glad that you guys liked the poem, in a way it is good that we can relate, but in another way it isn't. Hopefully all will work out, we talked last night and she kind of admitted to our friendship becomeing shi##y, and that we just have our problems right now, hopefully we'll get the chance to work it all out soon. Thanks again!! smile
¤poe¤


Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
9 posted 2000-10-01 07:23 PM


that was great, keep writing!

~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~



cutie2005
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA
10 posted 2000-10-01 09:39 PM


this was very good, and sad.. I know were ya coming from. I think almost every does. I have had like 3 best friends myself. but the one i have no i think is going to keep working out.. I hope so anyway. I hope you do find a good friend.. everyone needs one!
  Luv ya,
   cutie

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
11 posted 2000-10-02 11:32 PM


Thanks guys for replying, and it is getting better now, and I'm glad you guys liked my poem. smiles ¤poe¤

Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed

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