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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
ok so this is pretty bad in my opinion but i decided to post anyway...i wrote it today anyway...was a little distracted.. I'm soaking in some sort of liquid, enclosed in a warm strong hold. I'm being tube fed pills and vitamins, makes me dead in the head. Strangely i dream of electric waves, transforming and entering the shrine. i hear someone speaking to me of some god, he's all around us and in the T.V. Conformist rituals embedded in the schools, follow the leader, makes us insane. Lobotomy desire in my heart, implanting me with a mechanical brain. Cut the cord to start a revolution.. Save Yourself From This!! There is no such thing as love.. it was just made up to comfort.. so kill the pain, kill your love. i don't even have to buy into this, i was born from the start. "'I am the the lizard king I can do anything I can make the earth stop in its tracks I made the blue cars go away |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem a lot. "There is no such thing as love.. it was just made up to comfort.." I loved those lines because i, at times, believe that love is this selfish thing that humans feel for their very own comfort. For the sense of belonging and stuff. I obviously do not think that at all any longer , but i did. I liked those lines a lot. Great job Anomaly. And yes......1 poem a day, People are getting used to my 3poems a day thing. Anyway....just to let you know......The 6th Round is going strong.....107 works in that one. 96 poems, 3 songs, and 8 Prose. It's heading strong. Anyway great job on the work and i hope to see more bud.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. I loved the twistedness of this. Crazy, man. Good work. ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
i absolutely LOVE your nonconformist poetry it is just so awesome!! keep it up i love this so much!! Your viewpoints are so good  ~*Pixie*~ |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey guys..thanks a lot...and just one big HEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO? I am buried up to my neck in Contradictionary flies I take pride as the kind of illiterature I'm very ape and very nice -Kurt Cobain |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
As alwas a great write! You have this way with the truth and such a neat way of putting it into words. Congratulations my friend. Keep it up, I do love to read them Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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