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Teen Poetry #3

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Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

0 posted 2000-09-27 06:42 PM

Deep within my heart you see,
lies hopes and dreams of you and me.

Are you really going to take it away?
And in my heart those thoughts must stay.

How insensitive can you be?
What is there that you don't see?

It could be perfect and just right.
Now what are you thinking? Now I must fight.

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

1 posted 2000-09-27 07:00 PM

wow another good poem. this one has a lot of meaning and i can tell where you're coming from. hope to see more!
Curlz

"i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky"
enrique iglesias

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-09-27 08:33 PM

This is really good, keep it up!

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-27 11:07 PM

Go for it girl!!!You sound so confident...Follow your heart...< !signature-->

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-27-2000).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-09-28 02:45 PM

You go girlfriend!!!!!! *snaps his fingers and walks away*

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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