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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
Am I second best? That's the way it seems. But maybe... It's another of my dreams. Another Dream of me and you, but its all fake, it's just pretend, so it has to be the way it was. Now we are just friends. Oh! How it hurts, to let you go, because for the past I have nothing to show. **sorry if this is a repeat i worte so many i cant' remember what i have poted LOL so be patiend with me  |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
i really like this poem, it shows more on the personal side, and that's good in poetry. hope that you weren't hurt too bad. keep writing! Curlz "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like your poetry, it's very good. Keep it up |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Doesnt really sound like a repeat to me...It sounds good!!!I like it!!!  The pain will eventually be set free...And then it will be better...Till that day comes I wish you the best...It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i like this one. it's really sweet for someone to say that about a loss. hoping you the best of luck. keep ya head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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