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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-09-27 05:20 PM


Who do you think you are?
You've changed me, you make me hate me.
I'm such a fool, when it comes to you; all of you.
I can't stand what you've done to me, who am I anymore?

I live day to day wishing to find someone true.
I thought it was you, and it never was.
I miss who I was before I met all of you.
I try so hard living just to make you happy.

Why can't I just say no?
It's obviously easy for you to do... you say it everyday.
I never want for me, I always give to you.
Where is it that I stand...?

I thought I was high up on your list,
You'd do almost anything for me, or so I believed.
I'm such a sap, I wanted you to be so much more for me.
Can you prove yourself? Not if you don't even care to do so.

Here I am, finally waking up.
I realize you never lived for me. Never wished for my happiness.
It frightens me how little you actually care about me.
Here I am, able to move on, and finally forget about all of you.


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curlygurly
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1 posted 2000-09-27 06:41 PM


this was a really good poem, i've felt this way sometimes. hope everything turns out ok!  
Curlz


"i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky"
enrique iglesias


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2 posted 2000-09-27 09:01 PM


It's great that you realize that you have to move on, go on to a better person.  Great poem!

"It frightens me how little you actually care about me.
Here I am, able to move on, and finally forget about all of you."


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3 posted 2000-09-27 09:04 PM


Oh wow Jenn!!!This is by far my favorite...Keep up the good work...I love reading it!!!

P.S.~~~Is this all true???


It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

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4 posted 2000-09-27 09:25 PM


i see you're finally venting your emotions from within.  that's good. keep it up  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Jenn Cirrincione
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5 posted 2000-09-28 04:32 PM


Yes, I guess you can call it truth... I've gotten really angry recently... first with all of the people around me... then myself. I realize they can't keep screwing me up if I don't allow it!
Thanks everyone for your replies!
Jenn


"He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright

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