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The Limit of the Unlimited
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The Limit of the Unlimited |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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This will be one of my few poems I post up from now on. I have realized a trend in replying to everybody elses poetry BUT mine. So I have decided to replenish a furmer base of replies to all of YOUR poems and then see what flows on from that to mine. The Limit of the Unlimited: Thinking thoughts that make no sense. My mind is a field that has no fence. I'm treading this world lacking a map and a cane. It's all a part of avoiding vain. Things that are, but never were. Things that can't, and cannot cure. It's all the will, and the living way. It's all that's happened throughout my day. I'm but a man who's lost in self Like a drinking cup on a thick plate shelf, And in that sense I learn to see What I will or will not be. So in the end my mind goes blank. I'm left alone while walking a plank. Here to stay and be thought a fool. Alone in my mind to forever rule.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Hey!! I'm finally the first person to reply!!! I love this one!!! It's awesome!! g2g to guitar now, write more tomorow!!! Luv yas!! Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I liked it. It made sense to me.... Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~~~This was really good...I liked it...What are you trying to say in the top part before the poem???Are you saying that you reply to all the other poems but get no replies to yours???If you are then look at my profile...I have over 1500 replies...And only about 90 of my original work posted... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
there is a trend..it is true, im sorry if i havent been around your poems in a while, im trying to search on each person and try to reply to their older poems that i havent replied to and i haven't done that on you. But this is very true. with regards to your poem...i don't know, but i feel a lonely person writing this one. i maybe wrong, but that's the sense that i get from it. like there is this anger in you from either being left alone or for just keeping yourself to your own. great work I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey Dopey..believe me i know what you're talking about when you say you don't get many replies to your poems...well this was great ofcourse and as you are trying to understand my poems more i have doing my best on yours...it's good that you're posting only 1 a day man... My Heart is broke, but i have some glue. Help me inhale, and mend it with you. We'll float around, and hang out on clouds. Then we'll come down, |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
This is really good, you make me jealous  . By the way, I don't avoid reading your poems. Keep it up mi amigo..hasta luegoBel |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
you know i love it!!! keep it up!!! your poetry is still SO awesome  ~*Pixie*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Another great poem Dopey! I like your work, it all seems to make you think. I like that |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I loved this tons tons tons. It kicked. Anyways, you better not stop putting poems up or ILL CRY!! You wouldn't want that now would you??hehe... ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
great poem homeboy I enjoyed reading it don't get mad when people don't respond to your poetry, sometimes they don't respond to mine. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
hey that was awesome!! I liked it alot. Keep writing!! Luv, SweetStuff PS ~ Thanx for the replies! ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
Hey Dopey, I added you to my private library because I enjoy your work so much. Keep up the good work. _shady_ |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
Hey Dopey, I added you to my private library because I enjoy your work so much. Keep up the good work. _shady_ |
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