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Ares
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since 2000-09-23
Posts 11
Berryville, Arkansas

0 posted 2000-09-26 11:02 PM


Upon the Days End

Upon the days end,
When darkness falls across the land.

My love, all alone in this night,
Brings me shivers of fright.
As I look upon you with my sight,
Wonders fill my mind in the night.

My love, upon starry night,
Upon heavens twilight,
I wish upon my shining star,
To bring me dreams of thee.

Upon day and night,
Along with God’s might,
I vision that you look beyond who you see,
And vision what I can be,
With your gifted touch,
Upon my heart.


My mind is gone,
While alone with no soul,
Should one go on so alone.

© Copyright 2000 Ares - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-09-27 06:54 AM


Beautiful Ares! Such tender and romantic sentiments  ... lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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