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Ten Worded Thoughts (5th)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-26 09:58 PM

Ten Worded Thoughts:

It seems upon any given moment
The centrifuge of life can tremble away slowly.
Taught to innovate, yet trapped in a puddle
Within the sidereal minute.

Hiking up the sunshined mountain
With no moralists way,
And my heart sinks below the sea
Like the ton weighing flower.

My rhyton weeps knowing that the
Cosmic balance has been broken.
Broken only to be glued back by cheap love,
And even that is not good enough.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

branden726

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since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

1 posted 2000-09-26 10:12 PM

You my friend are the most technical teenager i have ever come across I dont know how old you are but hey it doesnt matter you use these words i hardly know in such great ways it makes me understand
peace
Branden

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-09-27 06:45 AM

Loved this Javier! You've woven excellent description into this wonderful piece ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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