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Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine

0 posted 2000-09-26 08:15 PM



Since when do you have to hide things from me?
This is crucial for me to know.
Now you have me so confused,
and it is impossible to let go.

Confusion is my enemy
it is ripping through my mind;
I just don't know what to do,
an answer I can't find.

Sleep is burning within my eyes,
a peaceful sleep that still won't come.
The peaceful sleep will not return
until all is said and done.

You told me you would treat me right,
and be different fomr the rest.
You need to live up to that promise,
I swear it's for the best.

© Copyright 2000 Justine - All Rights Reserved
Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 380
Maine, USA
1 posted 2000-09-26 08:22 PM


Teenie, you KNOW I OOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE you! And I saw this at school this morning... uh you knew that... and you also know that it rocks my FREAKING world! Love ya!  
branden726
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since 2000-09-25
Posts 607
Bay City, MI
2 posted 2000-09-26 10:08 PM


I can keep my promise to you,
I will not hide n e more,
Plz never let me go,
And i will help you not to be so confused,

this poem was so cool i had to kinda just make a lil sumthin back to ya



"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
3 posted 2000-09-26 11:06 PM


that was a great poem! keep writing!

Luv, sweet stuff


~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~



Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-09-27 12:46 PM


Since when do you have to hide things from me?
This is crucial for me to know.
Now you have me so confused,
and it is impossible to let go.

Girl I know how you are feeling with this part (at times)...You know what I dont like is that I grow attached to guys and then its harder for me to let them go in the end...I wish you the best!!!


It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
Posts 375
Maine, USA
5 posted 2000-09-27 05:30 PM


hiya hunny, even though i can barely talk to ya in person i know that i can always talk to ya through this thing-a-ma-bob   i like this poem and i know what sparked this and you can ALWAYS talk to me, even though i can't really talk back all that well LOL   Call me and we can BOND hee hee hee  

Love ya lots sis,
Valerie

~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~

curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 276
USA
6 posted 2000-09-27 07:14 PM


wow! how do you write like that? i think that is an awesome poem! i'm reading a lot more of yours and i think they're awesome!
Curlz


"i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky"
enrique iglesias


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