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Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine

0 posted 2000-09-26 04:59 PM


Too many chances I have taken,
not a whole lot were thought through.
But this one was.
I want to be with you.

Will you stay here with
me and make my time worthwhile?
Or will you let go of my hand,
and turn away from my faded smile?

It would hurt so much,
to see you go,
But tell me now,
I NEED to know.

I put a lot on the line here,
to take this chance you see.
Think it over, let me know,
Consider this My Plea.

© Copyright 2000 Justine - All Rights Reserved
curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 276
USA
1 posted 2000-09-26 05:02 PM


wow this was really good, and i know how you feel. as if you don't know if it's for real or not. hope to read more like this cuz it was really good, something i can relate to!
Curlz


"I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky"
Enrique Iglesias

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
Posts 375
Maine, USA
2 posted 2000-09-26 06:48 PM


Sis,
Hey girl, you know i love you and everything you do and i'm here for you no matter what. Even if he doesn't choose you, i know how much you like him but things always have a way of workin out in the end. Just don't get mad at him if he doesn't "choose" you, he was just following his heart and one of these days you will be in the same position and you will do the same. See ya later girl

I love you lots,
Valerie

~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~

branden726
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since 2000-09-25
Posts 607
Bay City, MI
3 posted 2000-09-26 07:24 PM


Hey ill tell you what if he wont choose you i sure will this poem is like WOW and i love it!

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 380
Maine, USA
4 posted 2000-09-26 08:25 PM


I OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU! *L* Wow I am getting a BIT carried away with that! Later tater!  
branden726
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5 posted 2000-09-26 09:20 PM


Hey there Justine hows it going? I still love the poem but heres my icq number that u wanted and n e one elst that likes my work can talk to me 2 its 92548389!


"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
6 posted 2000-09-26 10:36 PM


If this is really happening, be sure to tell us what's going on   I like the poem a lot!  
Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
7 posted 2000-09-27 06:27 PM


OKAY Y'ALL! heres muy story.  well my best guy friend and i decided we would be good together.  soooo we were going to hook it up in a few weeks... and well... he decided that he like this other girl he just met ass much as me and he doesn;t know who he wants now.  adnd he is making his "decison" on fiday... thanks for the concern Lakewalker   it means a lot   if anyone wants to look me up on ICQ my # is 40420483
~*justine*~

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
8 posted 2000-09-27 09:15 PM


Girl you shouldnt sit around and wait for some guy...Even your best friend...Its not worth it...I mean what happens if he chooses her over you...You will still (maybe) be good friends...But if someone did that to me I would look at them differently...As if I am second best to them...You catch my drift...Well keep us posted on whats going on!!!OK???

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

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