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Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-09-26 04:21 PM

A Harsh Reality

A summer of memories,
made and created.
You were gone in an instant,
left me lonely and jaded.

I was nothing to you,
you meant so much to me.
I’ve been slapped across the face,
by a harsh reality.

Now I don’t even exist,
it’s like you’d rather forget,
all our times together,
and even the day we met.

I tried my hardest,
I was so good to you.
I was there for you, cared for you--
What more could I do?

But it’s more than over now,
we aren’t even friends.
I’d like to be,
but I guess the end was the end.

We hardly talk now,
and when we do, you’re so rude.
Hopefully we can be friends,
when you stop being such a fool!

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

1 posted 2000-09-26 04:25 PM

wow do i know how you feel. it really hurts when that happens! hope that it will work out for the best and you will realize that you don't need him! hang in there

Curlz

"I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky"
Enrique Iglesias

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

2 posted 2000-09-26 04:27 PM

i do so know the feeling. being spurned is one of the worst feelings out there. i certainly hope this friend of yours comes to their senses!

good luck.
and excellent rhythm in your verse. it flows very well. < !signature-->

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

[This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 09-26-2000).]

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

3 posted 2000-09-26 07:04 PM

Hey Sara This is wicked good i love it. it's better then your rest i think anyway. TTYL
bye

Love
Valerie

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

4 posted 2000-09-26 07:04 PM

Hey Sara This is wicked good i love it. it's better then your rest i think anyway. TTYL
bye

Love
Valerie

~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

5 posted 2000-09-26 07:22 PM

Hey I myself have not read n e of your poems but this one is very good it started out slow but in the end made perfect sense love the poem keep it up!

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

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