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Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-09-25 08:21 PM


Your face so innocent
Your lips so elegant
And I ask myself
Am I in a dream?

You have changed my life
Told me things I have never been told
Loved me in ways I still can’t explain
You have opened my eyes to the world
I look forward to every time we are together
I cherish every moment we speak
And treasure the words of love you say

Before I met you
I had low self-esteem
And hope
Now, that’s all changed
My self esteem is high
And hope is not needed
Because I have found what I was looking for

You and I are so much alike
Could it be?
Just a dream?
Pinch me
Wake me up
All I can say is
I hope it isn’t a dream
Because I am in love
With the most beautiful girl in the world.

*-This poem is dedicated to my one, true love.  She means the world to me (as you can see) and through poetry, I am able to show that best.  I love you Nikita*


*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

© Copyright 2000 Richard Melick - All Rights Reserved
curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 276
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1 posted 2000-09-25 08:30 PM


AWWWW! how sweet. that was a really goooood poem   excellent poetry, i think it's the first i've read by you and i hope to see more!
Curlz


"I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky"
Enrique Iglesias

Ender
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since 1999-12-08
Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA
2 posted 2000-09-25 10:29 PM


Thanx curly.  Its sort of a new style for me, but i think i like it best.

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-09-26 05:55 AM


What a beautiful tribute to the one you love Ender ... she is a fortunate young lady to share your heart. Well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2000-09-26 01:01 PM


I'm glad I finally read a poem about satisfaction and not hurt.  This is a really a good poem. keep it up my friend.  Hope you've given this to her.

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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5 posted 2000-09-26 04:23 PM


This is such a nice poem   I think it's great, I like the flow of it.  Great writing!
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