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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-09-25 06:39 PM


Die Alone:


Here I am alone at last
Back to where I once commenced,
And now I yearn to release my tears
But holding back lets me savor the pain.

Life is stationary while I die here
Lonely like a caged soul.
Trapped within memories of the once was,
And I serve for nothing.

We can't seem to ever forget,
And that is why we diminish
In holes of nowhere and clouds of never.
Oh, the tears of lost souls are visible now!

I see everything that was fading.
Life seems so bleak
With the non-existence of love.
Living and serving to die alone.

Rotting, withering.
Where is the life in me?
It's nowhere, it's lost forever.
Nowhere to find, nowhere in mind.

Dying by relieving my pain in pure lonliness.
I die in form and without consequence.
Oh death, take me now like the virgin queen.
I will be your faithful servant.

Serving a death sentence of trash bag thoughts.
Being pulled by the only thing, a force of fear.
And I lay in a hot, fiery pit.
Burning forever, turning to a parade of ash.

Blowing in the distance I see the wind of time.
I try to catch up but it left me behind.
And oh lord, take me now away from this place.
I serve no purpose, I die without a face.

My body has no feeling, my mind is a blank.
And I, I wait for you to take me away
But in all logic I know that I must stay
In this no name place to die alone.





I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-09-26 03:43 PM


This has a lot of feeling behind it.  I like this poem, keep them coming Dopey
Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-09-26 09:53 PM


I realize that hardly any people reply or post up thoughts to my long poems. Either that or they are just utterly sick of my 4th wave. Do NOt FEAR!!!!! The 5th Cycle is coming right now!! HURA if you care, BOO if you don't. Either way, im having an ok day!




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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