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branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2000-09-25 05:52 PM

Sometimes you fly,
Sometimes you die,
Sometimes you make it up to the sky,
Sometimes you fall so so short,
I am one who fell just a little short.

I am so glad that I did not fly up to the sky,
But instead I flew into the arms of you.
You are my angle
The one who will never die
The one who didnt let me fly up to the sky.

I stared at death,
And death wanted me,
But instead your the one who in the end took me.

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-09-25 05:57 PM

I liked this one a lot!! It was so sweet! You are very talented and I can't wait to see more!!
Love Always
~*~Star~*~

p.s.

Welcome to Passions!! I'm sure you'll enjoy your stay here.

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

2 posted 2000-09-25 05:58 PM

Very impressive, nice first post.

Ooooh I get to be the 1st to say Welcome to Passions!

Great poem, hope to see more soon! Keep it up, hasta luego
Bel

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

3 posted 2000-09-25 05:59 PM

Okay so StarPryncess posted before me.....

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

4 posted 2000-09-25 06:03 PM

Thanks guys this is a lovely poem and im very happy with it to i am working on plenty more and hope you guys will enjoy them to
by the way you all make me feel at home here thanks

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2000-09-25 06:16 PM

Welcome to Passions!

This is a wonderful piece. I'm so glad that someone was there to catch you... it's amazing how paths can cross, isn't it?

PS-check your e-mail!

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

6 posted 2000-09-25 06:51 PM

Welcome to passions!!!I hope that you like it here...Great first post...I can relate to what you are saying...I dont know what would have happened if my boyfriend never came into my life...Hope to see more work!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

7 posted 2000-09-25 08:13 PM

HEY! welcome to passions! i'm new too and i know ur gonna love it. the poets are so awesome and they really cheer you up in the replies. i really loved the first post, and it's good to see that someone has an angel!
Curlz

"I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky"
Enrique Iglesias

~*Meghan*~
Junior Member

since 2000-05-22

Posts 17

8 posted 2000-09-25 09:19 PM

WELCOME!!!

Hope you enjoy your stay as much as I am. Passions is the perfect place to write, because we all enjoy the work! This piece was awesome! Can't wait to see more!
~Best wishes~
Love,
~*Meghan*~

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

9 posted 2000-09-25 09:54 PM

Well thank you all for making me feel at home i feel so special lol no if u guys wanna see another piece i have one and if u like this one the other one will knock u away.

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

10 posted 2000-09-25 10:25 PM

Great first poem. I love it alot. I cant wait to read more from you. the topis in this one is very new and unique from what i have seen in the past. great job!

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

11 posted 2000-09-26 03:36 PM

Welcome to Passions

And the teen forum. I liked this one, great job

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

12 posted 2000-09-26 10:02 PM

Hey guys thanks alot i worked hard on this one but i have plenty more on here that need some reconigiton plz if you have a chance check out "im that guy" or "do you love me"

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

13 posted 2000-09-27 02:02 PM

ouch....I fell... but the ground was kinda hard....

luvz, VS

Experience of survival is the key

To the Gravity of Love
~*~Enigma~*~

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

14 posted 2000-09-27 03:46 PM

Ahh, yes, WELCOME to Passions!!! I forgot to say that earlier. ANyways, I like this and I may be getting off subject here, but I love flying. I've always wished I could fly and I tried to once. ANyways WELCOME

and enjoy it!!! Please read some of my poems. But the 03:30 thing was a mistake and I don't know what happened. Love yas, Allysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

15 posted 2000-09-28 05:17 PM

Okay hey look i guess ive been shot down lol me no fly no more this poem was popular when in its day (3or4 days ago) lol ne ways thanks for all the replys

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

16 posted 2000-09-29 03:43 PM

Yes well the poem was nice. Good job and keep it up. I have been reading a lot of you today because well, you post a lot! haha...ok bye!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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