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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-09-24 10:11 PM


At night when I am scared
She was the only one that cared
She'd put her arms around me
So I couldn't see the darkness that lied within me
She always listens to what I have to say
And I know that she is here to stay
When things get rough
She teaches me how to be tough
Sometimes when I just want to die
She'll show me my wings and teach me how to fly
She leads me through my life
Just so I won't end it with a knife
I'm glad God sent her down
I know he doesn't like to see me frown
This poem, I really don't know how to end
Cause I love her so much and she is a really good friend

*dedicated to my best friend, Jessica, thanks for sticking with me*


~Guys are like stars,
there are millions
of them, but only
one can make you dreams
come true~

© Copyright 2000 Nikkisweet - All Rights Reserved
Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
1 posted 2000-09-24 11:27 PM


a magnificent and heartfelt dedication. sometimes when we face those demons inside, the scariest part is admitting we might need a little help. you are lucky to have each other. very well penned thoughts, as well. thanks for postin' this.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

Caz
Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133
ConcepciĆ³n, Chile
2 posted 2000-09-25 01:21 AM


Wooow, great poem, excellent poem. You're very lucky to have a friend like her, I wish I had a friend like that. This poem really touched my soul, and I think it's great to have a friend like that with you. Well, thanks, and bye.

It's been raining since you left me.

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-09-25 12:03 PM


Nikki~~~You sure are lucky to have a friend like her...My best friend was just like her until recently...I dont know what is going on with my friend...But oh well is the way I see it...If she doesnt want to be friends with me then she can go find herself a new best friend...Keep up the good work...

p.s.~~~Did you give this to her???


*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

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since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
4 posted 2000-09-25 12:35 PM


what a wondeful thing to say a bout your friend.  She must be really special.  Hope you have given this poem to her.  I love this poem...keep writing

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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