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A Love That Will Never Be The Same
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A Love That Will Never Be The Same |
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~*Meghan*~ Junior Member
since 2000-05-22
Posts 17 |
A tear will fall at midnight a heart will break at noon A love that once was hopeful, will never be the same. A tear will fall for hatred, a tear will fall for shame, a tear will fall for the love, that will never be the same. A heart will break for being let down, a heart will break for misunderstanding, a heart will break for the love, that will never be the same. So guide your heart on a clear and straight path. The winding roads are the one's that give the heart the wounds. Sure a heart will heal, but time will only tell. The love that once was carried, never will be held. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem a lot. I liked the format. Good job and i liked the message because it applies to my life tons. Good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow I like this one!!!It is good...So much truth about having a broken heart...Keep it up I cant wait to see more... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Your talent is extraordinary...Beautiful poem. Sorry to see what you're going thru right now. Kepp ya head up  As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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