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Ares Junior Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 11Berryville, Arkansas |
Life My poems are my life, Just and true, But love I never knew, Until that day I saw you, Now I can't write about my misery in the night, But only you and all your might. My mind is gone, While alone with no soul, But I shall continue to grow. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Our writing often reflects our our lives and feelings... I'm glad that you've found a bright spot in your life... I hope we see some of that beautiful poetry here! Great job.  False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes well what we go through in life obviously have a large impact upon what we write about. I am glad you will be writing about good stuff now, hopefully not ....uh.... bad. Keep it up  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Ares Junior Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 11Berryville, Arkansas |
Poetry is both good and bad. We all write whats inside us. But most of us can only write about the bad stuff which is good. My mind is gone, While alone with no soul, But I shall continue to grow. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Your poem is great, it's great to read a happy poem, 'cause I just can't find something happy in my life to write about. Well, thanks for writting happy things, and I hope that your life is as great as your poem. Bye. It's been raining since you left me. |
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