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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-09-24 09:55 AM


Too young to know,
Right from wrong,
To feel his arms around me,
Just makes me stutter.
But there’s something more,
That he wants,
Something, I’m not ready,
To give up.
If I say no,
Will he leave me,
Or will he understand?
I knew what I was getting into,
When I started this,
Knowing that he’s experienced,
While I’m still a sweet, innocent,
“Daddy’s little girl”.
He said he could handle that,
And I thought I could too.
But now it looks as if
We were both wrong.
I don’t care it he leaves me,
I have to keep myself.
If he leaves me or not,
I know that I did what was right.

~*~ Tamma M. Offenstein ~*~




If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



© Copyright 2000 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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1 posted 2000-09-24 01:42 PM


Tamma~~~Sounds like this guy is trying to pressure you into something...And it doesnt sound like its worth it either...Follow your heart and make the right choices...

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

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2 posted 2000-09-24 02:30 PM


your poem shows perfectly how much your feelings are confused you are right now.  Great write!!! If he understands, he's akeeper, but if he doesn't, it mean he doesn't really respect you, so let him go

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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