I'll weave my magic just for thee..

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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2000-09-23 09:03 PM

I'll weave my magic just for thee
Spell binding your heart so you can just only see
Of what you have done and how you have hurt me
Maybe this will finally open up your eyes
Instead of having your head stuck in your lies
You're tongue only speaks in riddles to my heart
Ripping and tearing it apart
And your eyes give way to your soul
There I always seem to find the demons that you hold

So why must you lie
And play me for a fool
When I obvisiously love and cherish you
Your gentle words were once my salvation
And now they bring my world to total devastation

But I'll let go, I'll move on
My soul will wake up and face the dawn
But what about yours?
Where does your fate lay?
Perhaps in the words you regret to say?

Go on, leave my world
For your heart never longed for such a different girl
It is true I'm not like the rest
Concieted you might say, but I admit I was a test
Perhaps to let you know, that in the end you're just like the rest

So pack your heart along with your soul
And run into that oblivion you long to know
Also, a little secret before you go
You're not really that hard to let go..

"Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night"

~Crash and Burn~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-09-24 01:10 AM

Holy this poem kicked serious butt. I can relate to it so well. The last line is obviously something that would be hard for me to do, but it'd be great as a little witty insult and last line for the poem like you did. This was amazing. I liked it a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

2 posted 2000-09-24 04:25 AM

Ok...If this is for me...well, it really hurts...but I guess I'd deserve it in some odd way that I'm not aware of. If it's not....well that's good. Either way, it's a masterful piece of art and probably the best of your's I've read.

Jeremy

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

3 posted 2000-09-25 06:00 PM

You never cease to amaze me. The way you write is so poetically correct. From the wording to the ryhme scheme. Loved it.

Thomas

Let not a word go unspoken,
A thought go unheard,
Let not one heart be broken
Dream of a perfect world.

-Th.A.P.

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

4 posted 2000-09-25 06:05 PM

I can't think of anything to say, I'm speechless. That was so good! Well, whoever this is about(and uhh I'm confused on that one) I guess you've gotten over this person huh? Well, good luck to you, keep it up
Hasta luego
Bel

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

5 posted 2000-10-05 12:48 PM

what an awesome piece of literature!
you exhibit powerful inspiration and great natural talent. your poetry is quickly becoming a fave for me.

         let him take his heart and go
           his loss here soon
            he'll surely know
         let him take his soul and leave
           for the winding web
           to which he cleaves
      He'll not forget the life you shared
                nor forget
             a single care
       FOR THE SPELL YOU CAST ON HE

[This message has been edited by shadydaze (edited 10-05-2000).]

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2000-10-05 03:05 PM

I love your style, this poem is great

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