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Teen Poetry #3

Hidden (short poem)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-23 08:51 PM

Hidden:

Mumbling incoherencies as eternity goes on.
Never ending while never commencing.
Just there in its place.
Just here where I lay.
Here is there,
And there is nowhere to be seen.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

1 posted 2000-09-23 10:17 PM

wow - short but to the point...a very nice poem...keep it up.

Luv Always,
Shell

**Life's full of too many mediocre things for love to be one of them**

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

2 posted 2000-09-23 10:31 PM

~*Dopey*~
Very interesting. It was short, but those make the best sometimes. Leaves more to the mind. Right, so I'm babbling, you can tell I have had too much caffeine. Keep up the good work. 4th batch...right?
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

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~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-23-2000).]