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Artificial Friends |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA 
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Friend or foe, Foe or friend. Only a friend, Would be there in the end. But you are not, So you are a foe. You don’t even like me, So why don’t you just go? It’s not my fault I have this crush; I can’t choose who I like. So do us all a favor, And get out of my life! A friend is not two-faced, Like you’ve both so often been. I remove the knife from my back, turn it on you-- How do you feel then?? If you have something to say, Say it to my face. Give me some respect, And stop being so damn fake. How can you say you’re my friends, When you gang up on me, And constantly beat me down, Becoming my enemies? If you hate me, show it. You don’t like me; don’t pretend. I’d rather have you hate me, Then be my artificial friends! B*tches... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WOW!!!I am amazed...This was really good...I have had friends like that...An my best friend is acting this way now...But you know what???I could honestly careless...She is hanging around with some people that are only using her...And one day shes gonna look back and wonder why me and her arent friends anymore...Good poem!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I love the final line.....the last word. It starts with a B and ends with an ITCHES. Great poem....and a perfect way to end it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Hey Sara! This is a really great poem... you must have written like a million by now!! Can ya let me in on a secret and tell me who this is referring to? It's killing me inside!! hee hee hee  Well again, this is great TA TALove, Val ~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~ |
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