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Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

0 posted 2000-09-22 10:35 AM

Some people play the game.
Some people are the game.
Some people live the life,
and some people are just alive.
Some people are fake,
Some people are genuine.
Some people are neither.

Some people can learn.
Some people can teach.
Some people are wise.
Some people are foolish.
What are you?
Who am I?
What assumptions can you make?
How do you know?
What do you know?

Be patient and wise
as a CROCODILE waits for prey.
Don't be too loud
but make yourself heard.
Don't be to quick with an answer.
You might have missed the question.
Opportunities come and go.

TIMING IS EVERYTHING!!

Make life work for you.
THINK ABOUT IT!
Don't just do it.
Don't just grab the bull by the horns.
Grab him somewhere else first.
Make him fear you
then the day is yours.
Dominate yourself and
others will follow you.

Procrastinate purposefully.
You'll get your chance again.
The lessons we learn from
watching the Crocodile hunter.
Apply very well to life.
Wait for what you want.
Then strike and don't let go.

Hope you like it Tre. This is also for all of my friends who critisize my overanalization of every facet that enters into my life. You see I'm the Crocodile.

Jason A. Carmen

I'm not concieted...I'm convinced.

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

1 posted 2000-09-22 11:26 AM

The crocodile hunter? The crocodile? Even with all this weird $#!+ in it, this poem is actually pretty good. But did you pull this one out of your butt or what? Good job.

Thomas A. Plemmons

P.S. Look who's first to reply!

Let not a word go unspoken,
A thought go unheard,
Let not one heart be broken
Dream of a perfect world.

-Th.A.P.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-22 02:06 PM

Wheres my poem huh???LOL This was good Jason...I enjoyed it much...You have such an imagination...Keep up the good work!!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-09-22 02:10 PM

I liked this poem, very creative. Good job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

4 posted 2000-09-23 04:49 AM

Tom, yes I reached way deep into the anal resceses of my mind and pulled this one out.

Erin, Don't worry I'll work on something for you. Its rare that I get a truly creative bug so when I get one I'll let you know.

Dopey, I do try my friend. Thanx!

Thanks everybody.

jason

I'm not concieted...I'm convinced.

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

5 posted 2000-09-23 05:08 AM

Erin had a great point...you do have quite an imagination with yer themes. I hope the "all of you" doesn't apply to me. I think you know that I know what's up. Keep that genuinity comin dude!!!

Jeremy

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

6 posted 2000-09-23 08:20 AM

Thank you for sharing your words of wisdom with us. You have given us some great advice to take with us today. Great job!

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence.

mystique
Junior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 22

7 posted 2000-09-23 10:32 AM

Hey Jay,
Thanks so much for this. It is everything you said it was and more. I do appreciate you being there for me and listening to endless rambling. Jay, you are a good friend and I love you for it.

Thanks again I will have to pass this on to you know who!
(he won't get it)
You the croc, Jay!

mystique

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

8 posted 2000-09-23 01:38 PM

So many wonderful points here Jay! You know I luv ya bunches. Your words give me inspiration. Before long I shall re-emerge from my room and post another shabby piece. Thanks so much for sharing and more so for the inspiration. I adore you!
Love Always
~*~Jess~*~

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~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-23-2000).]

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

9 posted 2000-09-24 01:53 AM

Jeremy, thanks for the reply and compliment on my imagination.  As you well know, this is only the tip of my weird A$$ way of thinking.

love bug, I guess this is kind of like my own version of sunscreen.  Thanks

Trace, hey girl whats up?  I'm glad you enjoyed.  Anyway, I'll see ya later.

Jess girl, hey baby I'm glad to have inspired you today.  Can't wait to see what you come up with.  Talk at ya later.

thanks everybody!!

jason

I'm not concieted...I'm convinced.

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