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...that I loved you
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...that I loved you |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
I knew I loved you From the moment you stole my heart I knew I loved you From the moment you took my hand I knew I loved you From the moment you showed me how From that moment you had my trust How to love you, how to care How to be a little better for myself How to show others I was there I knew I loved you Even when you called me names I knew I loved you Even when you didn't care I knew I loved you Even when you let me down I even loved you when you let me fall But now I don't know if I still do Now I don't know if I can still trust you I just don't know what I'm supposed to do Guess I just thought I loved you Guess I just thought you were sincere Guess I was just stupid to believe That I loved you Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Once again you've expressed yourself artfully and very well. Excellent poem. Thomas Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
VS~~~This is amazing...I love it...You had me fooled though...I thought that it would end differently when I first started reading it...But I enjoyed it much...Keep it up!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem. Very good!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hehe, that's just me: full of surprises! thnx for the replies!! luvz, VS Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Hey, why do I think this poem is about me? Woooow, it's incredible how easily we can see ourselves in the poems of others. VS, I just can't stop loving your poems, they are so great. However it's sad to hear what you're going through. Well, sorry for taking so long to reply, and thanks for your excellent poems. Bye. It's been raining since you left me. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
VS~ you express yourself so well. The words just seem to work with you babe. Keep it up. Soon, your heart will hurt a little less...until then, there are people like me who understand and willing to listen. E-mail me at StarPryncess17@hotmail.com Keep your head up girlie! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~< !signature--> ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
ey...thanks guys!! caz&jessica: check your mail!! luvz, VS Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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