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Wet
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0 posted 2000-09-22 01:12 AM


Life in God

Flames of Blue and Wine of Red,
The moonlight shines from overhead.
I drink to the days beyond my thought,
As stars lite up the sky I sought.
From the moon to my soul,
In which I found my goal.
Everlasting bitterness,
In the eyes man witnesses.
For now the mind rests,
In one of life's tests.
And let all rejoice,
To the most holy voice.

© Copyright 2000 David Danielson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-09-22 01:46 PM


i liked the ryhme of this poem. I liked the poem. Keep it up Wet!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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2 posted 2000-10-01 04:03 PM



  Hey there. This was really, really cool. Wonderful words.

   ~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

Isabel Galaxia
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3 posted 2000-10-01 04:07 PM


This is really good, I liked it a lot!!  Keep it up, hasta luego
Bel


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Deranger
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4 posted 2000-10-01 07:15 PM


Interesting look at life.  But when we look at life, what exactly looks back? Our selves? Our gods? Whoa...i need to stay off the Strawbarry Milkshakes...hehe

In-wishing-milkshakes-contained-less-narcotics

THERE IS NO SPOON

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"Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven"



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5 posted 2000-10-01 07:20 PM


"And let all rejoice,
To the most holy voice."

It's good to know that the Lord has a place in your thoughts. Keep up the great work!


False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.



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6 posted 2000-10-01 07:59 PM


i agree with LoveBug.  It's nice to know.  At the same time, it's also nice to see someone write something about their beliefs.  I too am a very religious person   keep it up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


AngelShell
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not heaven nor hell so...
7 posted 2000-10-01 08:47 PM


wow...great work...so simple yet so infective (is that a word...I haven't had my daily coffee fix yet so excuse me if I make up words) but infective in a good way...
Make me think...

**life is like an ice cream...the trick is not to get brain freeze**

**I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away**
~Robbie Williams~

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8 posted 2000-10-02 07:55 AM


Hey, this is great Wet, keep it up
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