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curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
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0 posted 2000-09-21 07:55 PM


Cancer: why speak of it
Do we know anything about it?
No we don't so why bring it up
Unless you have a good reason
Well AI have a reason
And my reason is this:
You never expect it until it hits
My mom is crying, she can't stop
Does my little brother know?
What kind? How bad?
Will it end in death?
What started out as a sore throat...
Then a minor lump, possibly a tumor
"Is it cancer?" doctors asked
They didn't really know
Test after test proved nothing
Then.... the phone rang
The surgery that was scheduled
To remove the lump
Had been cancelled
Then the news hit
It was...... cancer
Why? Why now? Why did this happen?
No one knows
Crying seems to be the only thing to do
What is to happen next?
We don't really know
Doctors, specialists, hospitals, treatments
Why did it have to strike
To my daddy
Daddy i love you


"I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky"
Enrique Iglesias

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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-09-21 08:10 PM


Oh Honey, I'm so sorry that this disease has struck someone you love. It's always hard to watch the ones you love suffer, but don't give up hope. The only way you can lose the fight is if you give up hope. Just keep your faith in the one true God, and He will help you through anything you may encounter. He doesn't give you anything that you can't carry. I'll be praying for you, your father, and your family. If you ever need to talk, feel free to e-mail me.

Weirdbeetlelady@forpresident.com


False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence.

Erin
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2 posted 2000-09-21 11:39 PM


What LoveBug said is true...Dont stop for one minute believing...You's can get through this...I will keep you and your family in my prayers...Just remember God works in mysterious ways...

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-09-22 06:46 AM


Beautifully express CurlyGurly ... Lovebug and Erin have said such inspirational thoughts, I can merely echo their words, and send hugs and prayers to you and your family.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-09-22 02:01 PM


Awwwwwww geeze..... this was was so so so so so so so so sad. I pray for your father....God... well.... this poem had a lot of feeling...made me feel a lot.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


jytree
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 336
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5 posted 2000-09-22 02:24 PM


it sucks that any man or woman should be struck down by cancer I will pray for your father

Chosen to live a joyful life,
Blessed with a huge heart,
Day to day I live the life,
Live the life brought to me,
So much unshared love yet to giv

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

6 posted 2000-09-22 10:04 PM


Girl this is so fRicKen unfair!!  Why do bad things have to happen to good people?!?  But dad'll be fine    Really good poem though...keep writing girl
Bel


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 36
Fitchburg, Ma, Usa
7 posted 2000-09-23 12:05 PM


Hey, I'm Min aka Fairy Princess. My dad passed away from colon cancer and when we burried him. I read something and said how I felt about his death, then we had a slide show. I was born 3 months early so I have a brain disoreder. I cannot walk I cannot sit on my own, but one day when my dad was alive I said I can not go on he said "you can do anything, once you put your mind to it". Now he's my angel.. My email is Champ00grl@hotmail.com My screen name is Champ00Grl  
*~Fairy Princess~*  

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