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Your Warning |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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Your Warning < !signature-->I never thought the day would come, where you would hurt me and be untrue. Now here I am with a broken heart, while crying over you. All these tears falling on my pillow, are from you living your childish ways. But I think of it all as silly nonsense, ot maybe a growing phase. This is just a warning cause your day is gonna come, it is soon gonna be your turn. So think of it like this, one day your gonna crash and burn. *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Well, I really am replying first to one of your poems. Last time someone beat me but not today. Hey, dry those tears and show this person whose in charge of your life. Which would be you. I'm not concieted...I'm convinced. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Yeah I remember that Jason...This has nothing to do with a personal experience...At least not now...But it has once before...But I no longer have tears to dry over this person...They eventually drifted out...Thanks for your reply!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"What goes around comes around" One of the few justices that exists. I know that you are over this person, but revenge is always sweet!  False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Boyfriends often are horrible and eventually you learn to move on after they break your heart, but it takes time and you never think you'll find another as good as him or that does things the way he does but you will. love takes time Lindsay "I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky" Enrique Iglesias |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thanks for the replies... LoveBug~~~The perfect words...I didnt even think of that... Curlygirl~~~I have found a boyfriend...This is just about someone from my past... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
another great poem ERIN!! hehe, don't tell me you still think your work sux, its just great... hehe, you realy don't need my mind!!! (actually, you really don't want to hae it!!!) luvz, VS Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Erin, Glad to hear you've gotten past this person and moved on to something better. Beautifully written. Thomas A. Plemmons Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I disagree with LoveBug...i do not think revenge is sweet. if anything it only brings about more pain and sorrow in the circle of fun and games. But anyway...good poem. One little note erin...do you like to write words like "gonna" in your poems? I dont know... just asking  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thank you all for the replies!!! Dopey~~~I have noticed that to with the word "gonna"...I dont know why I do that...But I agree with LoveBug...I think that the person that wants to get revenge, will be happy with what the person gets... But we all have our own opinions so oh well... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I'm just really hoping for your sake that this isn't about yer Latin fellow... I don't think it is but if so...well...that blows goats' ass!!!! Anywhoo....I'm glad that yer over this lil' problem and I'm glad that you have the talent to convey it to us all so nicely and emotionaly. btw... you need to email me yer number again still and when I can get hold of ya so that I can do that. Jay and I still want to come up there and hang fer awhile and Thomas might too... Jeremy Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Amen! you're the S***girl!! keep it up my dear, I might just have to kick this dewd's ass. hehe < !signature--> Take careLove Always ~*~Jello~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jello & Jeremy~~~This is not about my boyfriend now...I dont know what this came from...I honestly cant remember...But thanks both of yous for the replies...They mean so much to me... p.s.~~~Jeremy e-mail me when you get a chance... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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