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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2000-09-21 08:28 AM


There is one person to talk to,
who always will be there.
But I know something is up,
and I don't know if you still care.
You wonder why we never talk,
why I never call.
But you don't call me either,
you seem to let me fall.
I used to talk to you,
every minute of every day.
Until you thought you need out,
so you let me slip away.
And you wander why we never talk,
when you still feel like this.
But you don't call me either,
we ended without a kiss.
And I want to call you now,
you're the only one who understands.
I want to talk to you now,
and have you hold my hand.
But you'd wonder why,
I was afraid to call,
afraid to talk,
afraid to fall.
And I can't answer that,
right now,
because I don't think,
I would know how.

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

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Erin
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1 posted 2000-09-21 08:59 AM


Girl it sounds like you are having a tough time right now...Is this one about Justin???Dont let him get to you (if it is)...Dont think about it...Just remember January is right around the corner if you are still waiting for it!!!

P.S.~~~How is your friend and her family???
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*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*


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Allysa
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2 posted 2000-09-21 03:26 PM


Erin: this is for Justin. I just keep reminding myself about January, clinging to that hope, and remembering that it takes two ppl to make a relationship work. About Jesica and her family, well, her mother died on monday along with her brother's father, and she died on tuesday afternoon, holding her boyfriend Alex's hand.

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

Erin
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3 posted 2000-09-21 03:30 PM


Allysa~~~I am so very sorry to hear that...My heart and prayers go out to you...Its a shame what goes on in the world these days...Just remember though she will be watching you from heaven...

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

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4 posted 2000-09-21 05:12 PM


Why does life suck so damn much? Sometimes it's so incredibly horrible. I'm soooo sorry about your friend I don't know you or them, but death is always terribly tragic. I hope it all gets bearable, never good, possibly never even better... but bearable. I understand your guy dilemma, I hope you find what you need. Nice work...
Jenn


"He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright

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5 posted 2000-09-21 05:20 PM


I feel ur pain girl! Life tends to be harsh and guys never seem to make it any better, don't they know when they're being stupid or do we have to tell them everything??? I can really read this poem and know what u are goin through
Curlz

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